The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The charts illustrate the place and the category of
dance
classes
with the proportion of Australian adolescents in one city.
Overall
, as is obvious, the majority of the population attended
classes
in private studios. Among teenagers under 11 years old, Ballet
dance
has more popularity, and Modern
dance
among 11 to 16 years old people. The pie chart’s data indicates that Private studios and School Halls share 48% of the former and 24% of the latter are the most favourite destinations for Australian children.
Furthermore
, community halls and college-based studios are the least interesting places for dancing among people, which accounted for 18% and 10% of the participants. The stacked chart shows that the number of students who attend ballet
classes
is significantly higher than the Tap and Modern
classes
among under 11 colleagues.
On the other hand
, the Ballet
dance
has the least number of participants, which is been counted about 300 students between 11-16 years old. Ultimately, 400 people attended Tap
dance
classes
, and 500 of them in Modern
dance
classes
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, classes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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