Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
The word admission doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase unfortunately. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb open. Consider changing it.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase unfortunately on reaching at my place when I open my bag. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase On my next day of college. Consider adding a comma.
There may be a verb use issue here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
There may be a verb use issue here.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
The noun phrase online request seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.
It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.
There may be a verb use issue here.
The word Yours' doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.