You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my lost student identification card. My name is Jennifer and I am new admission
Replace the word
admitted
in
the college in Change preposition
to
Physics
department. I received the card on my day of orientation which I clearly remember putting in my bag pack. But Correct article usage
the Physics
unfortunately
on reaching Add a comma
unfortunately,
at
my place when I Change preposition
apply
open
my Wrong verb form
opened
bag
I couldn't find it.
On my next day of Add a comma
bag,
college
I Add a comma
college,
got
Verb problem
learned
to
Change preposition
that
know
without Verb problem
apply
id
card I would not be able to have access to any of my classes as all the class doors have digital locks. Upon contacting student services I got to know that I have to submit Correct article usage
an id
online
request for it but I haven't gotten any reply Add an article
an online
for
my request since Change preposition
to
then
and it has been five days already. I am very scared as I feel like my studies are getting affected the most.
I would really appreciate you
if you would look into the matter and Correct pronoun usage
it
could
solve my issue as I don't want to lag behind in my studies.
Thank you for your time.
Verb problem
apply
Yours'
sincerely,
Jennifer.Correct your spelling
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs. This helps the reader follow your thoughts more easily. For example, your description of how the loss affects you and your request for a new card can be in separate paragraphs.
task achievement
Ensure all necessary details are included in your response. You could suggest possible solutions or ask specific questions to the director to demonstrate a proactive approach to solving your issue.
task achievement
Your writing tone is appropriate and polite, and you communicate your issue clearly.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear greeting and closing which are appropriate for this type of correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite