The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes
of
the town called Stromer between 1995 and the present time.
In 1995, it can be Change preposition
in
seen
lots of green areas and there was one big farmland on the south side of the city. Only 2 blocks of houses were placed in 1995. Verb problem
were
Additionally
, there was only one shop at
the centre of the town. The figure shows just one main road through Stromer in that year.
Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, it is clear that
there are lots
of development in the city Correct quantifier usage
lot
according to
the map. The farmland on
the south is smaller in the present day. Change preposition
in
Likewise
, the forests have been smaller since 1995. It can be said that the population is higher because of the new blocks of aparments
Correct your spelling
apartments
were
built. Correct pronoun usage
that were
Moreover
, there are more shops and there is a scholl
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school
at
the centre of the town. On the north-east side, an airport is shown Change preposition
in
in
the map these days. Change preposition
on
Furthermore
, the road has lots of branches which reach all the structures.Submitted by bloodylady on
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