You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
The bar charts illustrate the proportion of genres of movies released and the all amount of ticket
sales
in the
years
1996 and 2006 in random
country
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countries
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.
Overall
, it is clear from the graphs that the percentage of
the
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films
realased
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released
in 1996 was less than after one decade
releases
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.
Moreover
, of course,
this
also
impacted
to
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ticket
sales
and had more per cent of
sales
in the year 2006. In 1996, drama had the biggest percentage at nearly 25% and
this
number
incresed
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increased
to 35% after ten
years
.
Additionally
, comedy was the less significant genre with 20% and it
also
presented
grow
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up to exactly a quarter in 2006. Fantasy movies
was
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were
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twice
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as smaller
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smaller
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small
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that
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it
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and had approximately 12% and 15%, in the
years
1996 and 2006, respectively. For romance,
percentage
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the percentage
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was the same for both
years
at about 7%. The biggest
sales
of tickets showed
the
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comedy at roughly 23% and
this
was 20% in the year 1996. Drama was
also
main
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the main
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one with around 16% in 1996 and 17% in 2006. Fantasy and
romace
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romance
had not so
more
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many
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ticket
sales
and had almost 3% and 5%, in 1996, sequentially. For fantasy it went up to
nearlty
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nearly
7%
,
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but for
romace
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romance
in
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it
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deacreased
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decreased
to almost 2%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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