The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph
presnts
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presents
changes in the amount of of goods transported in the UK categorized by the means of transportation (road- water- Rail- pipeline) through a period of 28
years
from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
, the largest quantities of products
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moved
in
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the UK
was
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by using the road for
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the time period.
According to
the data, the
amont
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amount
of
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of goods transported
through
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the
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road increased slightly from 70
million
tonnes
to 90
million
tonnes
through
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the
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28
years
.
Similarly
, the quantities of merchandise moved
through
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sailing
in
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water rose
steadly
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steadily
over the same period, reaching around 60
million
tonnes
.
furthermore
, the number of goods transported by train experienced a varied
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pattern
patron
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peroid
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period
periods
of stability at 40
million
tonnes
from 1974 to 1979,
then
a slight fluctuation between 30 to 40
million
tonnes
from 1979 to 1997. After
that
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it returned
steady
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at 40
million
tonnes
for the
last
5
years
.
In addition
, moving products
throurgh
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through
the pipeline
icreased singificantiliy
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increased significantly
by 20
million
tonnes
in
first
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ten
years
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the
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remained
reletively
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relatively
unchanged at approximately 20
million
tonnes
for the following
years
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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