The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph
presnts
changes in the amount of of goods transported in the UK categorized by the means of transportation (road- water- Rail- pipeline) through a period of 28 Correct your spelling
presents
years
from 1974 to 2002. Overall
, the largest quantities of products was
movedChange the verb form
were
in
the UKChange preposition
to
was
by using the road for Unnecessary verb
apply
all
the time period.
Correct determiner usage
apply
According to
the data, the amont
Correct your spelling
amount
of
of goods transported Change preposition
apply
through
Change preposition
by
the
road increased slightly from 70 Correct article usage
apply
million
tonnes
to 90 million
tonnes
through
Change preposition
over
the
28 Correct article usage
apply
years
. Similarly
, the quantities of merchandise moved through
sailing Change preposition
by
in
water rose Change preposition
by
steadly
over the same period, reaching around 60 Correct your spelling
steadily
million
tonnes
.
furthermore
, the number of goods transported by train experienced a varied patren
, starting with Correct your spelling
pattern
patron
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a peroid
peroid
of stability at 40 Correct your spelling
period
periods
million
tonnes
from 1974 to 1979, then
a slight fluctuation between 30 to 40 million
tonnes
from 1979 to 1997. After that
it returned Add a comma
that,
steady
at 40 Change the adjective
steadily
million
tonnes
for the last
5 years
.
In addition
, moving products throurgh
the pipeline Correct your spelling
through
icreased singificantiliy
by 20 Correct your spelling
increased significantly
million
tonnes
in first
ten Correct article usage
the first
years
and the
remained Correct article usage
apply
reletively
unchanged at approximately 20 Correct your spelling
relatively
million
tonnes
for the following years
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