Increasing the price of fuel is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people

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that

change

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the price of fuel is

a

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effective way to reduce the

number

of

traffic

and

pollution

.

However

, I think that policy is not on target because it can take another

problem

such

as increasing the price of goods and

groceris

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groceries

.

Whereas

, There is another way to solve

this

problem

as with

growing up

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the

number

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growing number

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of public

transport

and personal vehicle ownership

rule

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rules

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. In the handler of

traffic

and

pollution

problem

an begin with rising the

number

of public

transport

along with

facilities. The

adding

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of public

transport

and

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their facilities lead people to change their

habit

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habits

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from

use

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private

car

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cars

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to public

transport

such

as city buses and trains

while

this

trend can

falling

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decrease

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the amount of

traffic

and

pollution

.

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,

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private vehicles

give

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positive

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effect

to

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social economic where the

number

of job vacancies

are increase

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increases

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and areas that are difficult to reach

becomig accesible

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become accessible

. In the meantime,

the

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another way can be done

with

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to

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restrict the rule of personal vehicle ownership by governments. The implementation of

this

rule will be effective because government regulations can bind societies dan apply broadly. The regulation can be in

form

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such

as consumers only get buy

personal

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car if they have family or they are in

the

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apply

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areas where public

transport

can not be

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. In

conclude

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conclusion

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,

drop-down

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the price of fuel to solve the

traffic

and

pollution

problem

is not

good

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choice to do, the government can adjust some

regulation

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regulations

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that

are

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apply

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bring more positive

effect

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effects

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where those not only provide

good

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a good

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effect to that

problem

but bring benefit to another field.