The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town called Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps compare alternatives that happened in a city whose name was Willington 3 several times( 1780,1860, and 2000).
Overall
, it was important that the vegetation areas decreased
while
the number of both people and facilities climbed.
According to
the graphs, the
river
was the best area that was the same at all times. At the start, in the centre of
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we can see the farms;
then
their sector declined and in 2000, they did not farm area.
In addition
, woods followed the agricultural region's direction owing to the fact a number of woods were in 1780;
thereafter
, their areas were reduced and in 2000, these trees were replaced by 2 different schools, 3 various sports- fields, and a road. The pictures demonstrate that in front of the
river
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not only a bridge but
also
a road which connected the
river
to the village since 1860.
Furthermore
, the figure for the village's inhabitants went up
due to
the fact that the score of homes in the beginning, was 100 after that, became 200 and
finally
, reached 500 in 2000;
additionally
, we can see some shops, near the
river
, and wetland for birds in 2000.
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