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The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the figure of Southland's primary exports in three years across international
tourisms
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tourism
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, dairy
products
 and meat
products
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that both 20... and 2025 have an equal amount which is the highest amount in all
period
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periods
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 of time; where
as
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apply
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,
the
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whereas the
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 number of main
exports
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export
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products
are
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is
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 the lowest in meat
products
. Observing the the chart in more detail, both 2025 and 20... are, considered to be the largest figures in both international tourism
anel
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and
 dairy
products
accounted
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accounting
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 for about 10
billions
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billion
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.
Then
, it
follow
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follows
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in2025
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in 2025
 to approximately 9.5
billions
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billion
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.
In contrast
, in 2000, the main exports in
daily
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dairy
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products
was
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were
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 the lowest number compared to
other
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the other
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 two years with around 8 billion.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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