The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the figure of Southland's primary exports in three years across international
tourisms
, dairy Fix the agreement mistake
tourism
products
and meat products
.Overall
, it can be clearly seen that both 20... and 2025 have an equal amount which is the highest amount in all period
of time; whereFix the agreement mistake
periods
as
, Correct word choice
apply
the
number of main Correct word choice
whereas the
exports
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export
products
are
the lowest in meat Correct subject-verb agreement
is
products
.
Observing the the chart in more detail, both 2025 and 20... are, considered to be the largest figures in both international tourism anel
dairy Correct your spelling
and
products
accounted
for about 10 Wrong verb form
accounting
billions
. Change to singular
billion
Then
, it follow
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follows
in2025
to approximately 9.5 Correct your spelling
in 2025
billions
.
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billion
In contrast
, in 2000, the main exports in daily
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dairy
products
was
the lowest number compared to Change the verb form
were
other
two years with around 8 billion.Correct article usage
the other
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