The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates the
number
of international Use synonyms
students
enrolled from 5 various countries at Use synonyms
Use synonyms
University
of Smithtown, Correct article usage
the University
Use synonyms
University
of Riverview, and Correct article usage
the University
Use synonyms
University
of Earlwood.
Correct article usage
the University
Overall
, it is apparent that Riverview Linking Words
University
has the highest Use synonyms
number
of international Use synonyms
students
from all Use synonyms
the
five countries out of all the named universities.
Regarding Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
University
of Smithtown, it has more Indian Correct article usage
the University
students
compared to Use synonyms
Earlwoood
by 6,000 Correct your spelling
Earlywood
students
; whilst, Earlwood Use synonyms
University
has higher numbers Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
of
students
from both Vietnam, reaching Use synonyms
for
3,000 Change preposition
apply
students
, and Colombia, only just under 1,000 Use synonyms
students
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, both universities have Linking Words
equal
Change the article
an equal
the equal
number
of Use synonyms
students
from Nepal and Indonesia Use synonyms
by
4,000 and 1000 respectively.
Turning to Change preposition
apply
University
of Riverview, Use synonyms
having
the most international Wrong verb form
has
students
from all the countries, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia. Their highest Use synonyms
Use synonyms
students'
Change noun form
students
number
was from India Use synonyms
by
around 7,500 Change preposition
with
students
, Use synonyms
while
their lowest was from Colombia Linking Words
by
only just 1,000 Change preposition
with
students
.Use synonyms
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