ou recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference. In your letter, say: what the conference is about how you know about the conference explain to him/her why it is important that you attend this conference You should write at least 150 words.
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
I am writing Capitalize word
Madam
this
letter to ask
tell about the conference meeting Add the particle
ask to
that is
held on this
upcoming sunday
. I was amazed when I Change the capitalization
Sunday
show
an advertisement Verb problem
saw
about
Change preposition
for
business
conference and that's why, I am asking permission to attend Correct article usage
a business
this
event
.
It is one the biggest event
where I will have a chance to get Fix the agreement mistake
events
knowledges
and Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
informations
about the current business scenario and Change the wording
information
pieces of information
also
, will get in touch with new contact which
can be helpful for my Fix the agreement mistake
contacts who
work
. Because one of my friend
attended Change to a plural noun
friends
this
event
last
time and got knowledge about the market which helped him a lot on
his job, he suggested Change preposition
in
me
Correct pronoun usage
I
to
become Fix the infinitive
apply
the
part of Change the article
apply
this
type of conference.
As we are going to work
on new
foreign project, I would like to join Add an article
the new
a new
same
Change the article
the same
event
from where I can get work based
information which will help me to Add a hyphen
work-based
work
effectively.
Kindly approve my decision and permit me to attend this
meeting.
Yours Faithfully,
Ankit PatelSubmitted by ap064911 on
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task achievement
Ensure to proofread your letter for minor grammatical errors and typos, such as ‘ask tell’ which should be ‘ask’ or ‘tell’ and ‘I show’ which should be ‘I saw’.
coherence cohesion
Organize the content more clearly by dedicating a single idea to each paragraph, this will enhance the logical flow of the text.
task achievement
The letter successfully explains what the conference is about and why it is important to attend.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a formal request to a manager.