You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
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In contrast
to the line graph given below, we can observe the percentage of exports
from Australia
to the major four countries
Japan, US
, Correct article usage
the US
China
and India. Furthermore
, according to
the data the comparison is between percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
exports
vs the year
. For instance
, we can observe last
two Correct article usage
the last
decades
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decades'
decade's
exports
from 1990s
to 2012.
In Change the article
the 1990s
this
era of industrial
revolution, Add an article
the industrial
countries
are focusing towards more and more exports
to improve their economy. Now a days
it has become very crucial to maintain the Correct the word
Nowadays
exports
of goods and transportation communication medium
. Fix the agreement mistake
mediums
From the
data provided in the line graph Change preposition
The
is showing
us the trendline of the exported materials from Wrong verb form
shows
Australia
to various other coutries
. Correct your spelling
countries
Firstly
, we can easily spot the top most exported country in the year
1990 was Japan with a staggering amount of 26% but that trendline has gradually decreased to secure the second most spot among exporting countries
by the end of the year
2012. As a result
of that, China
increased it's
Replace the word
its
exports
to secure the top most
spot from being the Correct your spelling
topmost
lowest ranked
exporting country by the end of the Add a hyphen
lowest-ranked
year
2012. In addition
to that, the exports
to both the countries
US and India are on
the third and fourth position from 2005 onwards. Despite all the difficulties encountered by the Change preposition
in
exports
industry of Fix the agreement mistake
export
Australia
, they have increased their exports
and production drastically from the year
2000 onwards.
To sum things up all the data given in the line graph, we can conclude that the overal
Correct your spelling
overall
exports
from Australia
has
been increasing Change the verb form
have
year
by year
but the most beneficial country is china
and after Capitalize word
China
gradual
decrease Add an article
a gradual
the gradual
of
Change preposition
in
exports
towards other countries
by Australia
has made it possible to increase production towards China
more and more.Submitted by debasistripathy.india on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, australia, countries, china, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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