the line graph shows population trends in Viet Nam from 1960 to 2020
The provided line graph illustrates the percentage of
population
trends in the countryside and megacities in Viet Nam between 1960 and 2020.
In general, the rural residents' Use synonyms
population
tended to decrease Use synonyms
while
the proportion of urban inhabitants witnessed an increase over time.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, in 1990, the rural people rate was at 85% more than nearly 6 times the figure for the urban Linking Words
population
. After a decade, the proportion of urban dwellers went up by 4% and witnessed a slight fluctuation to 20% in 1990. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the countryside Linking Words
population
dropped slightly to 80% in the same period.
In 2010, the citizen's rate rocketed to 30% before reaching its highest proportion at 37% after 10 years. Meanwhile, the percentage of countryside residents witnessed a significant fall to 70% in 2010 and continued to decrease by 7% in the Use synonyms
last
year of the period.Linking Words
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