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The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the Parkway Hotel's customer
service
ratings
 via a questionnaire by 100 guests in two years, which are 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, it is apparent that the percentage of guests
rated
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who rated
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 the
service
excellent
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as excellent
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 and good increased in both years and
having
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had
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 the highest fractions in the
last
 year,
whereas
 the remaining
ratings
 (satisfactory, poor, very poor) declined in the time given with very poor
ratings
 making the least portion in 2010. Regarding people who rated the hotel's customer
service
with
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as
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 excellent, they grew from only 5% in 2005, which was the lowest proportion, to 28% in 2010. In a similar fashion, good
ratings
 went from 14% in 2005 to a percentage of 39 in 2010, making it the
most
Correct word choice
highest
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 rating given in that year. Turning to the remaining, guests who rated satisfactory to the
service
 were the highest with nearly half in 2005;
however
, the percentage dropped to just 17 in 2010.
Likewise
, poor and very poor
ratings
 accounted for 21% and 15% respectively in 2005, and both decreased in 2010 making 16% collectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words service, ratings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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