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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the change in
number
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 of people participating in 5 distinct activities at a particular social centre in Melbourne, Australia. It shows the period between 2000 and 2020 and is divided into 5 categories:
Film
club
, Martial
arts
,
amateur
 dramatics,
Table
tennis
, and
Musicial
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Musical
 performances.
Overall
,
film
club
 and martial
arts
 had relatively the same
participants
 throughout the years with slight fluctuations
while
this
 index for
table
tennis
 and
musicial
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musical
 performances had a big growth, and
amateur
tennis
 decreased.
Film
Club
 had
the
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 vast
number
 of
participants
in
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apply
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each year. In the years between 2000 and 2005, the
number
 of people who
prefer
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preferred
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film
club
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clubs
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,
that
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which
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 had the highest
number
 of
participants
 (64), and martial
arts
 has feebly decreased to 61 and 31, respectively.
Amateur
 dramatics’ and
table
tennis
’
participants
,
conversely
, became more for 2-3
participants
, resulting
29
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in 29
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 and 20, respectively. “Musical performances” activity opened its
door
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doors
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 only in 2005, and it
had
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an
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immediate skyrocketing
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 in the
number
 of
participants
, growing from 0 to18 in 2015,
such
 as
table
tennis
,
that
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apply
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had
a
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stability until 2010 and grew from 20 to 37.
Film
club
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clubs
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 and martial
arts
, which are considered
as
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the most popular activities among social centre
participants
, had
inconsequental
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inconsequential
 oscillations in their indexes.
Nevertheless
, there was an activity that was losing its demand from 2005 until 2020, which is
Amateur
 dramatics, of which
number
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the number
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 of
participants
 reached the lowest point in the graph – 8. Beginning
from
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in
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 2015,
film
club
, martial
arts
, and musical performances rose slightly, showing 76, 38, and 19, respectively.
Similarly
,
table
tennis’
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tennis
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participants
 have
increases
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increased
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, but dramatically from 37 to 53 in just 5 years.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, film, club, arts, amateur, table, tennis, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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