The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
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The pie charts compare the intake of three kinds of potentially harmful nutrients through usual meals in the USA
Overall
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, it is clearly evident that
dinner
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contributes the largest amount of sodium and saturated fat
while
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the sugariest food is
snacks
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.
On the other hand
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,
breakfast
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contains a low proportion of all these elements
whereas
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the intake of these nutrients through
lunch
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is moderate. In detail, the amount of sodium is very high at 43% in
dinner
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, which is 14
percent
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per cent
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more than the figure
of
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for
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this
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substance in
lunch
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. Surprisingly,
breakfast
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and
snacks
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have the same level of
this
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nutrient at 14% each.
Dinner
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contributes the biggest portion of fat with 37%
while
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breakfast
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is served with only around half of
this
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amount.
However
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, the amounts of fat in
lunch
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and
snacks
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were slightly higher at 26 and 21
percent
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per cent
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respectively. Analyzing the figures of sugar reveals that, almost half of the total sugar contribution is from
snacks
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at 42%.
Conversely
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,
dinner
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provides only 23% , which is much lower compared to the contents of other nutrients in
this
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meal. Noticeably, the sugar content of
breakfast
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is the same as
fat
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the fat
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in
this
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meal at 16% but
lunch
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has a little higher figure.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, snacks, breakfast, lunch with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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