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The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (20 mins.)
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The line chart illustrates three reasons
of
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air
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 pollution in the UK for 15 years, from 1990 to 2015.
It is clear that
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 total
air
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pollutants
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 experienced a downturn with transport and
households
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.
Whereas
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 transport was the only source of
air
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pollutant
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pollutants
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 that remained stable.
Overall
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, sources of
air
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pollutants
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 in the UK have a decreasing trend.
Industry
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The industry
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 which took the majority of the
air
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pollutant
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pollutants
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 had a sharp decline from roughly 5.5
million
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tones
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 in 1990 to 2
million
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tones
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 in 2005.
Additionally
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,
households
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also
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 decreased gradually starting at 1
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and hitting the lowest at zero where we can tell that there were almost no
air
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pollutants
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 coming from
households
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 in 2005.
Due to
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 the decline, the amount of total
air
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pollutants
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also
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 fell from around 7
million
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tones
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 to 3
million
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tones
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 during the period.
On the other hand
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, transport was the only one which stayed constant. It rated the lowest with
households
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 with the figure of 1
million
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tones
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 in 1990 but maintained
it's
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 amount
during
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 15 years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, households, million, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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