The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The line chart illustrates three reasons
of
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for
air
pollution in the UK for 15 years, from 1990 to 2015. It is clear that
total air
pollutants
experienced a downturn with transport and households
. Whereas
transport was the only source of air
pollutant
that remained stable.
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pollutants
Overall
, sources of air
pollutants
in the UK have a decreasing trend. Industry
which took the majority of the Add an article
The industry
An industry
air
pollutant
had a sharp decline from roughly 5.5 Fix the agreement mistake
pollutants
million
tones
in 1990 to 2 million
tones
in 2005. Additionally
, households
also
decreased gradually starting at 1 million
tones
in 1990 and hitting the lowest at zero where we can tell that there were almost no Correct your spelling
tonnes
air
pollutants
coming from households
in 2005. Due to
the decline, the amount of total air
pollutants
also
fell from around 7 million
tones
to 3 million
tones
during the period.
On the other hand
, transport was the only one which stayed constant. It rated the lowest with households
with the figure of 1 million
tones
in 1990 but maintained it's
amount Replace the word
its
during
15 years.Change preposition
for
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, households, million, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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