The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.  Write at least 150 words.   (20 mins.)
The line chart illustrates three reasons
of
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air
pollution in the UK for 15 years, from 1990 to 2015.
It is clear that
total
air
pollutants
experienced a downturn with transport and
households
.
Whereas
transport was the only source of
air
pollutant
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pollutants
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that remained stable.
Overall
, sources of
air
pollutants
in the UK have a decreasing trend.
Industry
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The industry
An industry
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which took the majority of the
air
pollutant
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pollutants
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had a sharp decline from roughly 5.5
million
tones
in 1990 to 2
million
tones
in 2005.
Additionally
,
households
also
decreased gradually starting at 1
million
tones
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tonnes
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in 1990 and hitting the lowest at zero where we can tell that there were almost no
air
pollutants
coming from
households
in 2005.
Due to
the decline, the amount of total
air
pollutants
also
fell from around 7
million
tones
to 3
million
tones
during the period.
On the other hand
, transport was the only one which stayed constant. It rated the lowest with
households
with the figure of 1
million
tones
in 1990 but maintained
it's
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amount
during
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15 years.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, households, million, tones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • drop
  • significant
  • legislation
  • technological advancements
  • comparative analysis
  • contributors
  • households
  • transport
  • industry
  • regulation
  • pattern
  • anomaly
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