The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages
The line graph provides information about demographic trends
of
Scotland between 1940 and 2020. There are three variables which are birth Change preposition
in
rate
, population growth rate
and death rate
. It is clear that
all the variables are experiencing a decreasing trend.
First and foremost, birth
Correct article usage
the birth
rate
experienced a significant fluctuation during the period. It had a steap
decline from approximately 2.5% in 1940 to 0.5% in 2020. Correct your spelling
steep
Simiarily
, Correct your spelling
Similarly
rate
of death Correct article usage
the rate
also
displayed an almost similar pattern over time until 2000. It decreased from 1.5% to roughly 0.3% during the period. Whereas
, it stayed stable for the next 10 years and then
started to increase gradually since 2010.
Taking a closer look in
the graph, we can see that Change preposition
at
growth
Correct article usage
the growth
rate
of the population also
fell after the rise between mid 1940s
and Correct your spelling
mid-1940s
mid 1950s
. It reached a peak at a figure of 1.5% in around 1955 and saw the most notable decline over 50 years. After Add a hyphen
mid-1950s
mid 2000
, we cannot see any population grow.Add a hyphen
mid-2000
Submitted by wjddbs2206 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
▼
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!