High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experienc

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stress or the commitment to a job are the principal reasons of sick people

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their workplace. In

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way, they can get their task done and do not put

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risk

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their position in their job.

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,

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result

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in a

loss

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of productivity of that

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and most

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can become a health

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for the coworkers.

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,

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ill

worker

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can not

fullfil

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fulfil

their duties in the same way that a healthy

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. The sick employee will be in distress and

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, the attention to the detail of that

worker

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will be less.

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, in some

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professions,

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will become a safety breach that can result in job accidents.

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, a sick lorry driver can be distracted by the pain or the distress, resulting in a truck accident, involving injured victims and

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of money in reparations for the victims and

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of ware.

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, going to work

beeing

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by being

sick can become a public health issue

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a fast pace, spreading diseases among

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coworkers. A classical example of

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is a

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with influenza in an enclosed space like

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office.

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worker

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can spread the disease among the other people in the workplace, and as if that were not

enought

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enough

, the coworkers can infect their own families, spreading the infection out of the

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to their own homes. In conclusion, going to work

beeing

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being

sick is a

risk

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for the ill

worker

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and the people who

works

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among that

worker

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. Resulting in

loss

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of productivity of that

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that can become a

lost

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of money for the company.

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can be a health problem among the workers of the place,

that

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can be infected by

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their

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coworker

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coworkers

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, resulting in

spreading

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the spreading

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the

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of the

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disease among the population.