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The figures provide information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The figures provide information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares numbers of economic growth and
then
 household expenditure between these categories from 1995 till 2010.
It is clear that
 the proportion of the economy which was used for householding activities in these years.
Overall
, there are only 6 categories which are housing,food,clothing, entertainment and
also
traveling
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travelling
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 around the world.
Also
, the average number of people living in
this
 country was the highest among the other classifications. In 1995, housing and food
was
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were
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 the same percentage in
this
 pie chart, but clothing,entertainment and travel
were
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decreased in
this
 period.
Furthermore
,
this
 line graph shows that until 2010 there was the same and equal quantity of
the
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economy and housing actions. By 2010, the average rate of growth of the economy was about
similar
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a similar
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 percent of
this
 year. Almost, 50% for 50% is for every year for all kinds of things like
:
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 dishes, snacks or domestic management.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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