The figures provide information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares numbers of economic growth and
then
household expenditure between these categories from 1995 till 2010.
It is clear that
the proportion of the economy which was used for householding activities in these years. Overall
, there are only 6 categories which are housing,food,clothing, entertainment and also
traveling
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travelling
Also
, the average number of people living in this
country was the highest among the other classifications.
In 1995, housing and food was
the same percentage in Correct subject-verb agreement
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this
pie chart, but clothing,entertainment and travel were
decreased in Unnecessary verb
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this
period. Furthermore
, this
line graph shows that until 2010 there was the same and equal quantity of the
economy and housing actions.
By 2010, the average rate of growth of the economy was about Correct article usage
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similar
percent of Correct article usage
a similar
this
year. Almost, 50% for 50% is for every year for all kinds of things like:
dishes, snacks or domestic management.Remove the comma
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