The figures provide information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compares numbers of economic growth and

then

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household expenditure between these categories from 1995 till 2010.

It is clear that

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the proportion of the economy which was used for householding activities in these years.

Overall

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, there are only 6 categories which are housing,food,clothing, entertainment and

also

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traveling

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travelling

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around the world.

Also

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, the average number of people living in

this

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country was the highest among the other classifications. In 1995, housing and food

was

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were

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the same percentage in

this

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pie chart, but clothing,entertainment and travel

were

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apply

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decreased in

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period.

Furthermore

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this

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line graph shows that until 2010 there was the same and equal quantity of

the

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apply

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economy and housing actions. By 2010, the average rate of growth of the economy was about

similar

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a similar

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percent of

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year. Almost, 50% for 50% is for every year for all kinds of things like

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apply

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dishes, snacks or domestic management.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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The figures provide information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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