The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line chart below illustrates the past and predicted

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proportions

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of

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population in four

countries

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from 1970 to 2040. It's obvious that all these

countries

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witness

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an upward trend during the whole given period. In 1970,

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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took up around 31% of the total population, which was the highest and was slightly higher than the 30% for

Malaysia

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. Meanwhile, the percentages of

Thailand

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and

Indonesia

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were evidently lower, with the

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of approximately 19% and 15% respectively. After that, these four

countries

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all increased consistently until

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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overtook

Malaysia

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ratio of 50% in 1990, followed by

Thailand

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and

Indonesia

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with about 13% and 24% respectively. During the remaining time,

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except

for

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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, the other

countries

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all saw an increasing trend , especially for the dramatic soar in

Malaysia

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, and

Indonesia

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took over

Thailand

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in 2000 and

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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in 2010 , with

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proportion of around 30% and 40% respectively. Until 2020,

Malaysia

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reached about 75%, followed by

Indonesia

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and

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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with approximately 60% and 50%,

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Thailand

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was the lowest(30%).

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, the whole pattern is predicted to be the same until 2040, when

Malaysia

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will occupy 80%, which will be significantly higher than

Indonesia

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,

Philippines

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and

Thailand

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, with

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ratios of about 60%, 50% and 45% in turn.