The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart below illustrates the past and predicted
proprotions
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proportions
proportion
of
global
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the global
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population in four
countries
from 1970 to 2040. It's obvious that all these
countries
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an upward trend during the whole given period. In 1970,
Philippines
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the Philippines
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took up around 31% of the total population, which was the highest and was slightly higher than the 30% for
Malaysia
. Meanwhile, the percentages of
Thailand
and
Indonesia
were evidently lower, with the
proportion
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proportions
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of approximately 19% and 15% respectively. After that, these four
countries
all increased consistently until
Philippines
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the Philippines
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overtook
Malaysia
with
the
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a
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ratio of 50% in 1990, followed by
Thailand
and
Indonesia
with about 13% and 24% respectively. During the remaining time,
exept
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except
for
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, the other
countries
all saw an increasing trend , especially for the dramatic soar in
Malaysia
, and
Indonesia
took over
Thailand
in 2000 and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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in 2010 , with
the
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a
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proportion of around 30% and 40% respectively. Until 2020,
Malaysia
reached about 75%, followed by
Indonesia
and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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with approximately 60% and 50%,
whereas
Thailand
was the lowest(30%).
In addition
, the whole pattern is predicted to be the same until 2040, when
Malaysia
will occupy 80%, which will be significantly higher than
Indonesia
,
Philippines
and
Thailand
, with
the
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ratios of about 60%, 50% and 45% in turn.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, philippines, malaysia, thailand, indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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