The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts
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the past
consumptions
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consumption
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for over 28 years ago and the projections for the next 32 years. The energies mentioned are Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower. As we can clearly see from
that
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graphs, there are no significant trend changes where all of them remain steady
especially
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for the projection. Even though, there are some fluctuations for the top three most consumed energy based on the history. Petrol and Oil
also
Coal, which originally consumed 35 and 15 quadrillion units, will have
gradual
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increase to approximately 45 and 30 quadrillion units, respectively. Both energies have
an upward trends
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until 32 years ahead. Meanwhile, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower had a slight
of
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fluctations
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fluctuation
.
However
, they end up
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stable with Hydropower as the lowest consumed energy.
On the other hand
, Natural Gas might
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seems
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look like to them. But as
the
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result projection, Natural Gas will manage to move to the third
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coal consumption.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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