The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts
how is
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consumptions
for over 28 years ago and the projections for the next 32 years. The energies mentioned are Petrol and Oil, Coal, Natural Gas, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower.
As we can clearly see from Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
that
graphs, there are no significant trend changes where all of them remain steady Correct determiner usage
the
especially
for the projection. Even though, there are some fluctuations for the top three most consumed energy based on the history.
Petrol and Oil Add the comma(s)
, especially
also
Coal, which originally consumed 35 and 15 quadrillion units, will have gradual
increase to approximately 45 and 30 quadrillion units, respectively. Both energies have Correct article usage
a gradual
an upward trends
until 32 years ahead.
Meanwhile, Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower had a slight Correct the article-noun agreement
an upward trend
upward trends
of
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fluctations
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fluctuation
However
, they end up will remain
stable with Hydropower as the lowest consumed energy. Wrong verb form
remaining
On the other hand
, Natural Gas might be
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seem
seems
look like to them. But as Add the particle
seems to
the
result projection, Natural Gas will manage to move to the third Correct article usage
a
poitions
under Correct your spelling
positions
position
the
coal consumption.Correct article usage
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