The graph below shows the regional household recycling rates in the UK, France and Germany from the years 2005-2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the percentage of regional household recycling rates in three countries between 2005 and 20015. The figure
of
Germany grew from 20% to approximately 50% from 2005 to 2015. In Change preposition
for
France
there was a moderate fall from 50% to 30% over the first eight Add a comma
France,
years
, after the figure rose sharply until 2015, when it reached 40%.In the UK
before there was a slight growth over the first two years
, the shape remained stable over the next two years
. The line of the UK
rose steeply, after which there was a slight increase at the end
of the period when it reached a peak of 60%.
Overall
, The UK
and Germany totally increased during
10 Change preposition
in
years
except
France Add the preposition
except for
that
decreased Correct pronoun usage
which
through
Change preposition
over
a
period. Correct article usage
the
Although
the figure for France ranked in first
5 Correct article usage
the first
years
, it was over taken
by Correct your spelling
overtaken
UK
towards the end of the period.Correct article usage
the UK
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