Swift global advance in
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nowadays does not only affect technology and government, but
itsChange the pronoun
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also
affectedWrong verb form
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others
such
as society, economy,
moreover
military. Military as we know is a defense
system
of a
country
or nation,
however
sometimes in several countries the
system
they take regarding the military
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varies but most of it is
compulsoryAdd an article
a compulsory
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system
.
CompulsoryCorrect article usage
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system
is where when men or women
withChange preposition
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adult age
graduatedWrong verb form
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from school they must sign
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to join the military whether they like it or not. Personally, I
don’t
agree with
this
system
which
forceChange the verb form
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young
people
to do things that
doesn’tChange the verb form
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fit with their selves.
To
force
people
to do something they
don’t
want to do is already against the law
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because it is
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likeChange preposition
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discrimination, where you are
forceChange the form of the verb
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to do something when you have your own rights.
this
type of encouragement is extinguishing
peopleChange noun form
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potential within their selves.
For instance
, when men or women
wantsChange the verb form
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to be
an Correct article usage
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artistFix the agreement mistake
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or maybe
doctorFix the agreement mistake
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because their capabilities are in
such
occupations but
countryCorrect article usage
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forceCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them to sign
forChange preposition
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the military, we
don’t
think that it will work properly in the government especially
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, because they have their own skills and capabilities about what they can do,
for instance
you cant tell fish to climb the trees or maybe tell the monkey to swim across the water because they have their own capabilities to do what they are good at something,
moreover
a
force
action conducted by a nation can lead to a rebellion from the
people
,
for instance
like The North Korean
people
did.
However
, it is so clear that
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military
system
creates patriotism among the
people
.
This
system
makes
people
to Change the verb form
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love their
country
and respect their
country
despite they have to do it by
force
, but it makes them
to Change the verb form
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salute their
ancestorFix the agreement mistake
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more and really
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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them
to Change the verb form
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obey the
governmentChange noun form
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will which not many countries without
compulsoryCorrect article usage
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system
can do it.
InChange preposition
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otherCorrect article usage
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it is still wrong for someone or
nationCorrect article usage
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to
force
people
to do things they
don’t
want to do
while
they
are Verb problem
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already
havingWrong verb form
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their own rights.
To sum up
, the facts
that Correct pronoun usage
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presented in
this
essay