The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table shows how many
employess
and Correct your spelling
employees
factories
were established in England and Wales in
1851 until 1901. Change preposition
from
Overall
, the total employees
decreased significantly. Correct quantifier usage
number of employees
In contrast
, the number of factories
showed oppositely where it had risen for
almost 3 times in 1901 compared to Change preposition
apply
previous
50 years.
On the one hand, the total employees in England and Wales were almost 500 thousand people in 1851 which was mostly dominated Correct article usage
the previous
from
Change preposition
by
male
with around 290 thousand employees. Fix the agreement mistake
males
However
, it decreased dramatically until reached the bottom in early
1900s with merely 60 thousand people and had almost the same proportion between males and females.
Change the article
the early
On the other hand
, despite the number of employes
Correct your spelling
employees
went
down, the number of Wrong verb form
going
factories
rose dramatically from not more than 230 factories
in 1851 until it reached for
almost 3 times in 1881 with more than 720 Change preposition
apply
factories
. However
, it had
slightly decreased by around 120 Unnecessary verb
apply
factories
in the next 20 years and reached 600 factories
.Submitted by bhaswarawira on
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