The charts below give information about the number of hours that students study each day at five different universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These
cherts
give some Correct your spelling
charts
informations
about Change the wording
information
pieces of information
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hours
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the hours
spend
per day by Change the form of the verb
spent
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the student
a student
student
for the study comparing five universities and the first Fix the agreement mistake
students
one
focuses Use synonyms
in
a period of Change preposition
on
internal
day of the week Add an article
the internal
while
the second Linking Words
one
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on
Add a missing verb
is on
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the weekend
weekend
. These Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
datas
underlined a Correct your spelling
data
dates
redution
of Correct your spelling
reduction
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the quatity
quatity
of time used on Correct your spelling
quantity
quality
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weekend
rather than on weekdays.
Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
Although
there are some differences, all the students of the five Linking Words
univercities
studied less Correct your spelling
universities
in
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at
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weekend
, especially the Fix the agreement mistake
weekends
last
two where Linking Words
Use synonyms
hours
per Correct article usage
the hours
days
are almost six. Fix the agreement mistake
day
While
on weekdays comparing Linking Words
studytime
in each university is very similar, almost Correct your spelling
study
students
studied 10 Correct determiner usage
all students
hours
per Use synonyms
days
. Fix the agreement mistake
day
However
the first and the second Linking Words
one
suffered little from Use synonyms
this
reduction in fact for the first Linking Words
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
hours
are Use synonyms
separeted
from less than sixty minutes and the second decreased Correct your spelling
separated
exactly
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by exactly
of
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apply
one
hour and Use synonyms
half
. Change the article
a half
Linking Words
At
the Change preposition
In
end
the third that had the best quantity Add a comma
end,
in
weekdays became third for Change preposition
on
hours
per Use synonyms
days
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day
in
the Change preposition
at
weekend
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, one, weekend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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