You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

You should write at least 150 words
In
this
era of technological advancement, exporting
goods
are
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is
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the
signs
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sign
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of a developing economy.
Goods
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Good
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transportation
and exporting various materials
provides
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provide
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us with a lot of insights about a country.
Firstly
,
this
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the
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below chart provides us with insight
about
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into
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the transported
goods
in
UK
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the UK
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between 1974
to
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and
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2002 by four different methods.
For example
, here four different modes of
transportation
is
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are
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involved i.e road,
water
, rail and pipeline.
According to
the given data,
goods
transportation
in the year 1975 via road was considered to be more
convinient
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convenient
.
Furthermore
, the
transportation
of
goods
via
water
has been steady since 1975.
In addition
to
this
pipeline
goods
transfer started in the year
of
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apply
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1975 and increased dramatically between
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the year
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year
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years
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1975 to 1985. Among all other modes of
transportations
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transportation
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,
goods
transfer via railway is making a good amount of impact and has been more
convinient
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convenient
. From 1975 to 1980 there was
steady
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the steady
a steady
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mode of transferring
goods
via road and
water
.
However
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However,
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the
water
mode
transportation
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of transportation
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became more popular and
become
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became
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the second most
choice
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common choice
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for the UK economy by
1980s
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the 1980s
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, transportation, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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