You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words
In
this
era of technological advancement, exporting goods
are
the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
signs
of a developing economy. Fix the agreement mistake
sign
Goods
Change the noun form
Good
transportation
and exporting various materials provides
us with a lot of insights about a country. Correct subject-verb agreement
provide
Firstly
, this
below chart provides us with insight Correct determiner usage
the
about
the transported Change preposition
into
goods
in UK
between 1974 Correct article usage
the UK
to
2002 by four different methods. Correct word choice
and
For example
, here four different modes of transportation
is
involved i.e road, Change the verb form
are
water
, rail and pipeline.
According to
the given data, goods
transportation
in the year 1975 via road was considered to be more convinient
. Correct your spelling
convenient
Furthermore
, the transportation
of goods
via water
has been steady since 1975. In addition
to this
pipeline goods
transfer started in the year of
1975 and increased dramatically between Change preposition
apply
Change the article
the year
year
1975 to 1985. Among all other modes of Fix the agreement mistake
years
transportations
, Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
goods
transfer via railway is making a good amount of impact and has been more convinient
. From 1975 to 1980 there was Correct your spelling
convenient
steady
mode of transferring Add an article
the steady
a steady
goods
via road and water
. However
the Add a comma
However,
water
mode transportation
became more popular and Change preposition
of transportation
become
the second most Wrong verb form
became
choice
for the UK economy by Correct word choice
common choice
1980s
.Correct article usage
the 1980s
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, transportation, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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