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The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of publishing a book from writing to distributing the ready books to readers.

The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of publishing a book from writing to distributing the ready books to readers.
At the beginning, the story or content is selected, and the writing is created and submitted to the publishing house for review.
Then
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 in the publishing
house
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 the whole text was carefully studied by the editors to identify the errors or make changes. Having finalized the editing stage, the contract is signed with the publishing house to design the frame of the material. Over the course of the next stage, the design and layout of the book are completed, and the final version is sent
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 printing. Once the printing culminates, the pages of
books
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 are checked in the correct order and the
books
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 are sent to the binding.
Subsequently
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, the
books
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 are covered and the author’s name, the title of the book and other details are stated on the cover of the book.
Finally
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, the ready
books
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 are sent to bookshops for sale. (S N)

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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