The illustrations below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams illustrate the
process
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of
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and concrete production.
Overall
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, there are six stages in the
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of
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-making which commences with crushing limestone
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clay and completes when packing
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in bags.
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, several components are needed for concrete production. The first diagram shows that to produce
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,
firstly
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, limestone and clay are placed on the crusher machine to crush into powder before going through the mixer.
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the power goes through a heating
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in the rotating heater.
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,
this
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power will go down to the grinder machine to form a
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. The
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of making
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ends when it is packed into bags. The second diagram presents the production of concrete for building objectives. In the first stage, 15%
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is mixed with 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, respectively.
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, the concrete mixer rotates in order to mix the ingredients together to make concrete.

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Ensure to maintain clarity and specificity when describing processes; for example, more precise descriptors could be used instead of 'power.'
coherence cohesion
Break down your ideas into separate, clearly defined paragraphs for better readability and structure. An introduction, body paragraphs for each process, and a conclusion can enhance coherence.
coherence cohesion
Your description of the cement and concrete production processes is clear and logically structured.
task achievement
The diagrams are well-described and the essay covers all key stages and components involved in both processes.

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