The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph displays
last
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year's percentage of
illiteracy
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from different parts of the world, in both men and women.
Overall
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, the chart shows that South
Asia
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is the main country with the most
illiteracy
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in both genders.
Moreover
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, the majority of illiterate are
females
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than
males
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. As per the results, it is shown that South
Asia
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holds the highest numbers as
females
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are above 50%.
While
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,
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Males
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are around 35%. In comparison, the lowest rate
in
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of
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illiteracy
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is in developed countries. with an average
percent
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of less than 5%. Comparing the genders, it is noticed that the
illiteracy
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rates
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rate
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for
females
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in Latin America is under 14%
while
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for
males
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is 10%.
In addition
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,
females
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in the Arab States and South
Asia
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had the highest rate, which
were
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about over 50% and nearly 55% respectively.
On the other hand
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,
males
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highest rate was in South
Asia
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was 35% and in Arab states was less than 30%. Unsurprisingly, less than 5% of
males
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and
females
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from developed countries could not read.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy, asia, females, males with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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