The bar charts below show the prevalence of obesity among boys and girls aged12 to 19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014. Summariseinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andamake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar depicts the
obesity
percentages by ethnicity among teenagers of both genders aged from 12–19, in the US, in the year
2004 and 2014. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, in 2004 and 2014 the
Correct article usage
apply
obesity
was highest in non-Hispanic
Black and lowest in non-Hispanic
White.
To begin
, the percentage of obesity
was at peak
(29%) in 2014 in Correct pronoun usage
its peak
non-Hispanic
Black boys and girls, whereas
the least
number of Correct word choice
lowest
adolescents
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adolescent
having
Unnecessary verb
apply
obesity
in the year
2014 was non-Hispanic
White (14%). Moreover
, the Hispanic ones are having moderate obesity
(17%) in 2014.
Similarly
, the major youngsters
suffering from Correct quantifier usage
number of youngsters
this
medical condition were non-Hispanic
Black (6%) in 2004, which was the most significant percentage recorded this
year
. However
, the minor ones were non-Hispanic
White (9%), which was the only percentile under 10%. Furthermore
, 12% of the teenagers were Hispanic who
Correct word choice
and
are having
Wrong verb form
were obese
obesity
in the year
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