The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections untill 2030.
The graph provides data on a 2008 report about the consumption of
energy
which was consumed in the USA between 1980,and 2030.
Overall
it is clear that
petrol and oil were the leader
of Change the noun form
leaders
energy
, while
coal and natural less popular than pertol
and oil. Correct your spelling
petrol
By contrast
, hydropower is the least uses
Wrong verb form
used
energy
.
To begin
with, the consumption of petrol and oil stood at 35QU in 1980, which was the higher than other
,Fix the agreement mistake
others
fluctuated
till 1995.Correct word choice
and fluctuated
Then
it will increase in 2030. Coal and natural gas started at 20Qu and 15Qu and crisscrossed and overlapped untill
2020. They will increase 23Qu,and 26Qu in the end. They will reach third and second Correct your spelling
until
position
in 2030.
In 1980, Nuclear, solar,and hydropower stood at 5 Fix the agreement mistake
positions
Qu
each. They will rise to 6qu, 4qu,and 4qu. Hydro-power is the lowest uses
Correct subject-verb agreement
use
energy
on Change preposition
of energy
this
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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