The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030.

The graph shows energy consumption in the US from 1980 to 2012, and projected consumption to 2030.
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The graph provides data on a 2008 report about the consumption of
energy
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that was consumed in the USA between 1980 and 2030, starting from 1980.
Overall
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it is clear that
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petrol and oil were the leaders
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energy
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,
while
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coal and natural gas were less popular than petrol and oil.
By contrast
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,
hydropower
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is the least used
energy
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.  Looking at the data sets in more detail, the consumption of petrol and oil stood at 35
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in 1980, which was higher than others, and fluctuated till 1995.
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it will increase in 2030. Coal and natural gas started at 20
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and 15
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and crisscrossed and overlapped until 2020. They will increase 23Qu,and 26Qu in the end. They will reach third and second positions in 2030. In 1980, nuclear, solar, and
hydropower
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stood at 5
Qu
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each. They will rise to 6qu, 4qu, and 4qu. Solar and
hydropower
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will have the same amount
at the end
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.
Hydropower
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is the lowest use of
energy
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this
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chart.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, hydropower, qu with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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