The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart average percentage of sodium and added sugar are the highest consumed two nutrients in the USA.
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the typical foods of three Change the verb form
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kind
of nutrients in amount of proportions, all of which could be harmful if over consumption.
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Overall
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However
, having in
breakfast Change preposition
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of
sodium usage is less Change preposition
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threefold
than dinner. Change preposition
than threefold
Moreover
, eating snacks the average percentages of added sugar 16% and saturated fats 16% are respectevily
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respectively
As well as
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breakfast and snacks are consuming exactly the same amount of percentage, it is 14%.
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apply
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lunch , in the USA, Correct article usage
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average
percentage of sodium and saturated fats Add an article
the average
observed
almost the same, which means from 29% to 26%.Add a missing verb
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