The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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the typical foods of three
kind
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of nutrients in amount of proportions, all of which could be harmful if over consumption.
Overall
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,
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the
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average percentage of sodium and added sugar are the highest consumed two nutrients in the USA.
However
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, having
in
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breakfast
of
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sodium usage is less
threefold
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than threefold
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than dinner.
Moreover
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, eating snacks the average percentages of added sugar 16% and saturated fats 16% are
respectevily
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respectively
.
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in
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breakfast and snacks are consuming exactly the same amount of percentage, it is 14%.
In addition
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the
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lunch , in the USA,
average
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the average
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percentage of sodium and saturated fats
observed
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was observed
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almost the same, which means from 29% to 26%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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