The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps depict the transformation of

Langley

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Town in 1910 and 1950. In 1910,

Langley

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Town was separated by Jordan and Sherman Streets, running parallel. Over the course of 40 years, the majority of the plan had been redeveloped, except for the aforementioned two main streets. The changes to the area included the development of the wasteland into a green space and the closure of the factory north to the

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. On the eastern side, there was a relocation of both the cafe and laundry sites,

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the construction of a New Lane parallel to Sherman Street. The former railway line and its workers' cottages were both demolished and turned into a vast park that had a pond in the middle,

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a playground for children at its bottom right corner, to the west of the newly built stores. In the western part of

Langley

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, the townhouses located beside Jordan Street were demolished and converted into three huge flats. In conclusion,

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experienced a tremendous alteration, which mainly focused on public facilities and residences.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban transformation
residential areas
infrastructure development
commercial activities
industrial zones
economic growth
urban expansion
public facilities
population growth
structured street layouts
central market area
parkland or green space

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The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Waste disposal presents increasing problems, especially in urban areas. What do you think are the causes? Give some suggestions to the government and individuals on how to reduce the amount of rubbish.

Some people say that the governments should pay for health care and education but others think that this is not the government's responsibility.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people work for the same company or organisation during their whole working life why I don't see is dead. It is better to work for different companies discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?