The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps describe the transformation in the layout of the
town
of Langley
in 1910 and 1950.
In 1910, the town
of Langley
had 2 streets, namely Jordan Street
, which was surrounded by townhouses, and Sherman
Street
, where a store, cafe, and Laundry were located. It consisted of a few residential areas on either side of the street
. On both the North and South of Sherman
Street
, there were wastelands, one with a factory on it and the other containing the railway worker's cottages.
Conversely
, in 1950, the town
of Langley
had 3 streets, Jordan, Sherman
, and New Lane Street
, connected with Sherman
Park in the middle, which had a children's play area. Moreover
, the townhouses on Jordan Street
were refurbished into large flats. Sherman
Street
had several mansions, as well as
the previous cafe and laundry shop, while
the stores were relocated onto New Lane Street
.
To conclude
, there were several improvements made in the town
of Langley
, which made it a more modern and well-organized town
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