The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general tickets sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general tickets sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.
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The most well-known
movies
by genres for both males and females,
as well as
ticket sales based on those
classes
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are described in a bar graph and a pie chart form for the 2010 United States. To summarize,
action
movies
are the most loved in general and especially for men.
On the other hand
,
although
romantic
comedy
movies
are not a major shareholder, they are highly preferred by female viewers. A closer inspection of the graph reveals that
action
and
comedy
movies
are most favoured by both genders, with
action
movies
at 40 units for men and 25 for women, and
comedy
movies
at 20 units for each gender.
However
, romantic
comedy
is the most chosen option for women with 30 units which is six times more than men. Thriller, Western, and science-fiction films are the least favoured and their total audience is 25, 20 and 15 respectively. Looking at the pie chart, it can be seen that the market is mainly occupied by
action
movies
with just a little less than half of the whole industry.
Comedy
movies
are in
the
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second place approximately with a quarter of all
audience
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audiences
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and ticket sales of romantic
comedy
and thriller
movies
are 12% and 10% respectively.
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