The figures provide info about growth in ecomomic and household expenditure across a range of categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given figures
illustatrate
the growth of the global economy and the levels of the purchase of some Correct your spelling
illustrate
products'
for a household.
Correct your spelling
products
Overall
, the line graph shows that there has
been slight fluctuations, which eventually led to a very insignificant downfall. The pie charts display the percentages of household items over 15 years.
Change the verb form
have
Firstly
, in 1995, worldwide economics were pretty stable with some minor ups and downs over the next decade. However
, in 2005, the rise in the global financial system goes
up to approximately 4%. But Wrong verb form
went
then
it decrased
drastically Correct your spelling
decreased
due to
the Economical Crisis
in 2008. Since Replace the word
economic crisis
then
, the world economy became
stable again in 2010.
Wrong verb form
has become
Secondly
, individuals tended to spend their budget on the most vital things such
as housing and dish in all 4 time intervals. Only in 2000s
, food Change the article
the 2000s
had
much more demand than ever, but Wrong verb form
have
then
its rate fell down
. After that, both aspects showed practically the same results as in 1995. Speaking about other categories, they were very stabilized, except in 2005, when the ratings of clothing, entertainment and travel slightly increased. Other classifications than these did not change much in terms of the inquiry.Change preposition
apply
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