The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The given chart indicates the percentage of fruit and vegetables by three groups of people .
That is
men , women
and children
.
Initially
, in 2002 women
are
seen to Wrong verb form
were
be having
the highest Wrong verb form
have
consumption
of 25% and the
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children
having
the lowest Wrong verb form
had
consumption
of 11%.
In 2006 the women
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women's
consumption
rate was at its peak of 32%.In general that year, the population was higher as compared to 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, women
have the highest consumption
rate as compared to the
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apply
children
and men in the three years 2002, 2006 and2010
.Correct your spelling
and 2010
Children
on
the other hand, have the lowest Add the comma(s)
, on
consumption
of fruits and vegetables as compared to women
and men respectively.Submitted by joycechumbaa86 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, children, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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