The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 & 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The chart

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an information

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about the comparison

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of four

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retail sectors in online

sales

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for 2 years (2019 and 2020) consisting of 4

sections

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which are

Electronics

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appliances,

Groceries

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,

Home

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and

Kitchen

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, and Clothing in Canada.

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, The

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attached to the two

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changed significantly from 2019 to 2020. Where the

Groceries

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and

Electronics

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experienced an increase but for Clothing and

Home

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and

Kitchen

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experienced a decrease.

Data

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shows that all four

sections

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experienced quite visible decreases and increases in online

sales

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. In 2019,

Groceries

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at 14% and increased in 2020 to 22%. Clothing in 2019 was at 38% and decreased to 22% in 2020. For

home

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and

kitchen

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in 2019 was at 29% and fell quite a lot to 11% in 2020. And

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Electronics

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in 2019 was at 19% and rose high so that in 2020 it was at 45%. The percentage of

Electronics

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sales

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via the

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experienced a very large increase at 26% over one year

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Groceries

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experienced an increase of 8% from 2019 to 2020.

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data

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provides benefits and shows that the success of

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and

Groceries

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sales

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via the

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is quite satisfactory. In the

home

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and

kitchen

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, there was a down to 18% from 2019 to 2020,

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in Clothing there was a

decline

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of 16%.

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data

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shows a significant

decline

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in the retail sector of both

sections

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in online

sales

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. The biggest

decline

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fell on

home

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and

kitchen

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, reaching 18%,

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decline

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touched a fairly large figure in one year.

Sales

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of the

home

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and

kitchen

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section in one year experienced a very large

decline

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. Meanwhile, clothing experienced quite a large

decline

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,

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as

home

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and

kitchen

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, which touched 16% in 2020. In fact, in 2019 it occupied almost half, namely 38%, a fairly large

decline

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in 2020 for the clothing section. The

decline

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in these two

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in

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2019 to 2020 reached 34%, which is a very large figure. Online

sales

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in the

home

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and

kitchen

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and clothing

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must try to recover from 

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 situation.