The chart below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie

chart

illustrates where

dance

classes

are held, and the bar

chart

supplements it by depicting the information about the number of members of the three types of

dance

classes

divided by age group. Looking at the pie

chart

first,

it is clear that

almost half of the

dance

classes

are conducted in private studios (48%). 24% of the remaining is convenient for

students

in schools to participate in

dance

classes

after lessons

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since their location is school hall. A little lower index is shown by the category called “Community halls and other”, maintaining 18%,

while

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10% of the

dance

classes

are held in college-based studios. The bar

chart

gives more detailed information about the number of

students

participating in the

dance

classes

. Surprisingly, the vast majority of the kids under 11 prefer

ballet

, which can be observed from the graph showing that 600

students

do

ballet

,

while

the least of them take modern

dance

classes

(300).

In contrast

, members between the ages 11 and 16, mostly choose modern

dance

over

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ballet

and tap, maintaining approximately 520

students

.

While

ballet

and modern

dance

have a big difference in comparing 2 age groups, tap does not. 420 11-16 years old

students

and 450 under

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students

take tap

classes

.