The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the process of manufacturing which starts from

diggering

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digging

a

clay

and

finish

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finishes

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with delivering the goods. First of

all

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all,

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digging

a

Remove the article

clay

a lump of clay

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clay

for

bricks

with an excavator.

Then

collected

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apply

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clay

purified

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was purified

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from different pebbles and garbage by a

metall

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metal

grid to take

high quality

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high-quality

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bricks

. As soon as

clay

is cleaned, it is

moving

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moved

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to the next step by a roller.

Subsequently

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Subsequently,

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clay

is being formed by a wire cutter

otherwise

with a special mould. Before the

bricks

are sent to the kiln, they are dried in the drying oven for 1-2 days. Once it is sent to

first

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the first

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furnace which is heating up from 200 to 980

degree

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degrees

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celsius

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Celsius

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, it is

moving

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moved

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to the second oven to heat from 870 to 1300 degrees. After the

kiln

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kiln,

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they keep in

cooling

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a cooling

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chamber for 48-72 hours.

Finally

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Finally,

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bricks

are ready for use, they are

packaging

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packaged

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and

uploading

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uploaded

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to trucks to deliver to customers.