The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare the
Internet
usage of individuals according to
a few age
categories and reasons for accessing the internet
such
as social media, paying bills, and sending e-mails.
Overall
, it is clear that
most users accessed the internet
for emailing purpose
and the opposite for social media.
Looking at social media usage, 100% of teenagers (18-25) preferred mostly to use the Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
internet
for texting and calling. And the
preference dropped dramatically when the Correct word choice
The
age
group increased and reached a value of approximately 30% in the above category. Around 70% of people belonging to all age
groups did email and approximately 50% and just above 40% used the technology for settling bills online and entertainment, respectively.
Surprisingly, on the other hand
, data relating to paying bills and e-mailing followed the same trend. Both overall
increased the value slightly with slight fluctuations, starting from exactly 60% in the teenager group (18-25) and grew
to just below 80% in the middle Wrong verb form
growing
age
(40-60) and
dropping by 10% and Correct word choice
apply
elevated
to 80% in the above section.Wrong verb form
elevating
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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