The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows Australian home Internet use by reasons and age groups.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide details regarding 3
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Internet in Australia's population slipt by 5 age groups.
Overall
, it can be seen
emailings
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emailing
took the highest place among the reasons,
while
there are similar levels in percentages of the
emialing
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emailing
and the paying bills.
According to
the information, social media has the lowest proportion, over 40% in the total Internet consumption and come
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percantages
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percentages
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this
figure
decrease
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significantly from 100% to just over 20% about
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5 times decline
while
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the population
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aging
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is increasing. Looking
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other two using kind of the Internet in more detail, it is evident that emailing is the leader with 70% of the
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users which has the
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rate
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in
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40
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-60 and over 65 age groups
about
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80%.
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two groups below 40 age make up
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60%
in
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sending
email
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emails
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. The same ratios even the levels of percentages
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are
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experianced
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experienced
in online paying bills over the ages.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • predominant
  • usage patterns
  • highlighting variations
  • compare and contrast
  • primary reasons
  • identify differences
  • age brackets
  • usage purposes
  • popularity
  • online shopping
  • banking
  • Internet use
  • age groups
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