The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature.
The provided line graph depicts information about the proportion of the
birth
rate
in Scotland in a period
of time between 1940 with the perspective of 2030.
Units are measured in percentage.
From an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that despite all the fluctuations the Birth
and Population
growth
rates are going to gradually decrease, whereas
the Death rate
has tended to rise.
At the beginning of the given period
, the birth
rate
commenced with the rate
of quarter. The birth
data for Scotland from that point started to fluctuate and from 1960 year when indices equalled 20%, the growth
of the population
started drastically drop
with expectations to reach a mere 5% in 2040.
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Population
Growth
Rate
has a similar negative trend. There is noticeable
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a noticeable
an
abrupt surge in the Correct article usage
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period
between 1950 and 1960 years when the Growth
rate
indices reached 15%, though there was a gradual dropping process which equalled nil in 2004.
There was a peak point equalled 15% in the 1940 year for the Death rate
, which started drastically dropping from that period
. As a result
in 2000, it reached an insignificant minority of nearly 5%, though from 2010 to 2040 there was an expectation of increasing in the death of the population
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rate, period, population, growth with synonyms.
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