The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts 14 per cent. For saturated fat
illustrates
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illustrate
ratio
of three various Add an article
the ratio
kind
of food that can Change to a plural noun
kinds
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be unheathy
unheathy
for human bodies if it takes more than it should consume namely sodium ,saturated fat and added Correct your spelling
unhealthy
healthy
sugar
in four meals .
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Overall
, the most significant about the graph is the dominant percentage Linking Words
for
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of
soudium
and saturated fat is Correct your spelling
sodium
dinner
Change preposition
at dinner
meal
Fix the agreement mistake
meals
.
Correct your spelling
while
while
, Linking Words
the
dominant Correct word choice
while the
percent
for added Replace the word
percentage
sugar
is Use synonyms
snacks
.
For breakfast meal the got a worldly value it almost equal 16 to14 per cent in all three nutrients .Change preposition
at snacks
as well as
lunch the percentage roughly the same by 29 to 19%.
For dinner meals the sodium record the highest percentage Linking Words
for
43 % . Change preposition
at
In addition
, added Linking Words
sugar
is less Use synonyms
by
10% , Change preposition
than
However
, snacks are completely the opposite. Added Linking Words
sugar
reaches the highest number 42% .Use synonyms
while
, sodium is the lowestLinking Words
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at
fr
dinner and snacks the the average number is 37% and 21% respectively.Correct your spelling
for
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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