The chart below shows the expenditure of three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004

The chart below shows the expenditure of three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004
The given chart delineates the expenses constituents, categorised into 3 main aspects, of UK citizens in 2004. On the whole,
while
people seemed to spend more on Food and beverages when they got older, a similar pattern was seen in entertainment.
In addition
, accommodation was relatively high in most surveyed individuals, with the exception of those over 61-75.
To begin
with, regarding those who were under 30 years old, Food and drinks accounted for only 5% of their total expense.
However
, the figures seem to increase
according to
age, with a value increment of 5% for every older group, up to 23% for the 76+. Meanwhile, the expenditure on Restaurants and hotels constituted 14% in most groups, except for the two oldest 61 and 75 years old (3%) and 76+ (8%). With regard to entertainment, the two youngest groups share a similar proportion of around 7%. These percentages
then
went up to almost 15% for the 46-60 and the 76+ age group.
Last
but not least, the 61-75s appeared to be the most willing to spend on recreation, with that making up nearly a quarter of their total spending.
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