The two bar charts below show the propotion of 14 to 16-year old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country and the top 3 foreign languages . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the information that students
who
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between
14 to 16 learn three foreign linguistics Add a missing verb
are between
such
as
French, German, and Spanish Change preposition
apply
in
abroad where Change preposition
apply
speaking
English as their mother Verb problem
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tounge
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tongue
while
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the other
other
chart describes both genders' proportion of study in 1984 and 2007.
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Overall
, it is clear that
girls had the
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to learn
other Change preposition
for learning
languages
than boys and French was the most preferable language than
Spanish.
In detail, in 1984, girls Change preposition
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was
the highest proportion of learning foreign Verb problem
had
languages
, which is around 59% but it was reduced by 40% in 2007. Boys' was
learning 30 per cent of other Correct subject-verb agreement
were
languages
in 1984 and there was a slight reduce
in 2007, at around 26%.
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Furthermore
, French was the most favourite languages
among students, which is a half surprisingly it Fix the agreement mistake
language
was shrink
significantly by a quarter in 2007. German was the second-favourite language, at a fifth in 1984 and it was reduced by one in ten in 2007. In 1984, Spanish had just 5% ,Wrong verb form
shrunk
in contrast
, there was a
increase Change the article
an
by
10% in 2007.Change preposition
of
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