The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line graph illustrates the alteration in the birth and the death
rate
in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.
Overall
, both categories have increased trend until 2021 which is predicted to go up in 2101 Looking at the details of the birth
rate
which had 20000
cases
at the beginning after reaching the climax in 1961 with data over 65000
cases
.
However
, the fertility
rate
has fluctuated around 50000 to 60000
cases
since 1961 until now. In the next 80 years, the natality is anticipated to decrease slightly until it hits the mark in 2101 with a
rate
of more than 40000. Regarding mortality,
this
data started with 10000
cases
in 1901 and accelerated for 120 years which has 3000.
Moreover
, the fatality
rate
is foreseen to catch up with the peak after 35 to 40 years before a subtle decline till the end with rates around 60000
cases
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