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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of
men
 and
women
 engaged in
further
education
 in Britain across three periods: 1970/71, 1980/81, and 1990/91.
This
 data is categorized by full-time and part-time study. In 1970/71, part-time
education
 was predominant among males, with approximately 1 million participants compared to just over 100,000 in full-time
education
.
This
 trend persisted over the years, with part-time
education
 remaining more popular among
men
, despite a slight decrease in numbers to about 900,000 by 1990/91. For females, part-time
education
also
 prevailed, but with a significant increase over the years. In 1970/71, around 700,000
women
 were enrolled in part-time study, rising to nearly 1.1 million by 1990/91. Full-time
education
 for
women
 began at around 100,000 in 1970/71 and experienced a gradual increase, reaching approximately 200,000 by 1990/91.
Overall
,
men
 and
women
favored
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 part-time
education
 throughout the periods, with a clear upward trend among females. The data indicates a growing preference for part-time study among
women
,
while
men
 exhibited a slight decline in participation. Full-time
education
 remained considerably less popular for both genders,
although
 with modest growth.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, education with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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