You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below depicts the
unemployment
rate
in Australia in 2012. In general, the results collected in rural areas
are higher than in urban areas
.
In the first quarter
of the year
, the unemployment
rate
in rural areas
is almost triple of
the Change preposition
apply
rate
in urban areas
, at around 6.5 percent
in the countryside and around 2 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the cities.
Eventually, moving to the second Change the spelling
per cent
quarter
of the year
, the rate
in rural areas
experiences
a decrease from around 6.5 Wrong verb form
experienced
percent
to 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, for the city areas
, this
number has drastically increased from 2 percent
to 4 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.
The lowest Change the spelling
per cent
rate
of unemployment
collected in the countryside is at
approximately 4.5 Change preposition
apply
percent
, recorded Change the spelling
per cent
in
between the second and third Change preposition
apply
quarter
of the year
. For the urban areas
, this
number is at almost 2 percent
, recorded in the third Change the spelling
per cent
quarter
of the year
.
In conclusion, despite the unemployment
rate
in rural areas
being higher than that in urban areas
, the rate
in the countryside is gradually decreasing while
the rate
in the cities is increasing overally
. Correct your spelling
overall
This
shows that people losing their jobs and unable
to get a new source of income in the city Add a missing verb
being unable
areas
is becoming more common nowadays, compared to in the rural areas
.Submitted by kanchanakularathna1991 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words unemployment, rate, areas, quarter, year, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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