The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.

The given three pie chart compares the average spending on four kind of food by people in China, India and all over the world in the year 2008 period.
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The pie charts illustrate the average expenditure on a variety of foods by individuals in two countries and the world in 2008. Units are given in percentages.
Overall
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it is clear that
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people prefer more on processed
food
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, and nuts and seeds are the least preferred items. Comparing the data of the two countries processed
food
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was the most common consumable product and
India
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was leading with 5%. And over the world, it has gained an attraction of 41%.
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, nuts and seeds gained only 4% of the world.
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, China was drastically dependent on more healthy foods
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as grains, vegetables and fruits compared to
India
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and other countries with values of 19% and 32%, respectively.
On the contrary
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,
India
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was the most popular for raw meat consumption and recorded an amount of 27%.
Similarly
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, the animal
food
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pattern of the other nations was almost equal to
India
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but
however
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,
China's
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highly rejected
food
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was animal-based
food
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recording a value of 15%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, india with synonyms.
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